tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2316104666482960522.post1443419614382820164..comments2023-06-24T01:46:13.044-07:00Comments on somewhere in the middle: She's Crafty: First Linesbfavhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14164661338051897220noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2316104666482960522.post-44500980580171851542011-10-14T18:57:18.531-07:002011-10-14T18:57:18.531-07:00First lines are soooo important. And so difficult...First lines are soooo important. And so difficult to do well.<br /><br />Great post, Brooke! If you're writing fantasy, I think for inspiration you should look to Rick Riordan, who seems to always start with action. Character can be revealed little by little along the way.Joanne R. Fritzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08076959910493197255noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2316104666482960522.post-35027366520169662692011-10-12T07:25:44.444-07:002011-10-12T07:25:44.444-07:00Urrgggh! That first line is tough. I re-worked and...Urrgggh! That first line is tough. I re-worked and re-worked mine. I have one that's working (for now). I'm still a bit stuck on the last line, however, and it's in flux. But....sometimes I read a super, fantastic book and the opening sentence did NOT blow me away whatsoever. Interesting.Barbara Watsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06547166495514562286noreply@blogger.com