Wednesday, July 10, 2013

She's Crafty: Jeopardizing Children in Middle Grade Novels---HUGE No-no

At the Big Sur in the Rockies Workshop, I was in a critique group with Andrea Brown from Andrea Brown Literary Agency. (Amazing.) When I finished reading my first chapter of my contemporary adventure, Andrea said, "Love it but you can't do it."

Say what? My chapter ends with two of my characters on the roof of the elementary school. Fun, exciting, who doesn't want to be on a roof? I do. I did it all the time as a child. The roof is a magical place. 

This is what Andrea explained: You can't jeopardize children in a story because if a child reads your story, climbs onto a roof and has an accident, parents will sue. And no publisher will want the liability. So your story will be rejected, no question. 

I completely understand the logic but for some reason this was an eye-opener for me. It is the reality in which we live and a bit of a downer, but I get it. Andrea and my group then helped me brainstorm where the children could go that wouldn't risk child safety. Now my kids sneak into the school through a storm cellar---exciting but also safe. 

So as a general rule when writing for middle grade, ask yourself: Could a child do this now and get hurt? If the answer is yes, revise. 

After I told my husband I needed to rework this, we had a sad chuckle about all the classic books that wouldn't be published in today's market if it met this criteria. So long Huck Finn. 

Have you ever had this problem in your own writing? Have you ever walked head first into a platform wall or hid in a wardrobe?

Monday, July 8, 2013

Marvelous Middle Grade Monday: The Land of Stories The Wishing Spell

Lauren picked this book based on a friend recommendation. She blasted through it. She wanted to read more than hang with her friends at the pool (this is a HUGE deal).  And then when I would pull her away and ask her about the story, she would talk my ear off about the characters and plot. This book is the first in a series, read her review below.

The Land of Stories: The Wishing Spell by Chris Colfer
published July 2012

Other books in this series:
The Enchantress Returns (#2) Aug 2013

The Hook: A brother and sister that are twins fall into their Grandmother's book. To get out, they must go on the most dangerous scavenger hunt (ever) to create The Wishing spell. But the Wishing Spell can only happen twice and has already happened once, and the Wicked Queen will do anything to stop them.

Why Lauren loved this book: I love the book because first off, I LOVE twisted fairytales. I also liked how Chris Colfer mixed up characters from classic fairy tales. One of my favorite characters is Goldilocks because she is a wanted fugitive. I liked Alex, the girl twin, because she loves to read and believes in fairy tales.

This is a fun adventure that both boys and girls will like. It is a great book for reluctant readers. This book is great for anyone 8 - 12 yr old...or older.

Want More? Check out Chris Colfer's website.



Friday, July 5, 2013

The List: Fabulous books for Girls who LOVE to read

I have four daughters. These books are a must before they are 12 but definitely not for my boy. This is the order I would introduce them to my girls. Truth be told, Lore is 11 and she's only read half these books. I'm going to need to go to the bookstore....I feel a binge coming on.

Fabulous books for Girls who LOVE to read (Don't torture your boys with these books.) 
  1. Ramona the Pest by Beverly Cleary
  2. Because of Winn-Dixie by Kate DiCamillo
  3. Falling In by Frances O'Roark Dowell
  4. Mary Poppins by P.L. Travers
  5. The Penderwicks by Jeanne Birdsall
  6. Little House on the Prairie by Laura Ingalls Wilder
  7. The Secret Garden by Frances Burnett
  8. Anne of Green Gables by L. M. Montgomery
  9. Sarah, Plain and Tall by Patricia MacLachlan
  10. Little Women by Louisa May Alcott
  11. The Witch of Blackbird Pond by Elisabeth Speare
  12. Alice in Wonderland by Lewis Carroll
  13. The Wonderful Wizard of Oz by L. Frank Baum
  14. Walk Two Moons by Sharon Creech
  15. Where the Mountain Meets the Moon by Grace Lin
  16. Island of the Blue Dolphins
  17. Julie of the Wolves by Jean C. George
  18. Roll of Thunder, Hear My Cry by Mildred D. Taylor
  19. Black Beauty by Anna Sewell
  20. Are you There God? It's me, Margaret by Judy Blume
What's your favorite on this list? What other books are great for girls who love to read?

Saturday, June 29, 2013

Fish Finelli Blog Tour + Author Interview with E.S. Farber

Fish Finelli: Seagulls Don't Eat Pickles by E.S. Farber
published April 2013

The Hook: When bully Bryce Billings bets Fish Finelli that he can’t find Captain Kidd’s legendary long-lost treasure, Fish and his friends embark on a quest to find real-life pirate treasure. Between sneaking into the library to track down Captain Kidd’s map, stowing away on a boat, and trespassing on an island, Fish and his friends have their work cut out for them. But will Fish actually be able to find Captain Kidd’s booty and win the bet? Appropriate for both boys and girls, this first book in the Fish Finelli series will inspire readers to use their imaginations, learn about the world around them, and appreciate the bonds of friendship.

Why I Loved It: Voice and perfect for younger middle grade boys and reluctant readers. Seriously, they will love it.

Want More? Read the first chapter here. Check out Fish's Facebook page.

Interview with E. S. Farber
(pictured with her son Niko)

Fish is a great character, what was your inspiration for writing him and this adventure? Also, which came to you first: the character or the plot?


My son, Niko, was my inspiration for Fish Finelli as a character and as a book series. (Fish Finelli is actually a nickname I gave him when he was small). His insatiable curiosity and interest in facts about everything from hieroglyphs to hot air balloons inspired me to create a boy character who, besides questions, has lots of answers and who, like Niko, loved learning so much, he wanted to share what he knew with everyone else. I also wanted to create a hero for boys who was smart and independent, spirited and compassionate, but also funny, with old-fashioned values and the grit to do what he set out to do. I wanted Fish to narrate in first person, sharing his “knowledge,” but not too much of it before he was interrupted by his two best friends. This was why I liked the idea of nonfiction sidebars as a way to include more information.

The character came first along with a few plot points—including the lobster piggy bank, the dare/bet, Roger and T.J, Uncle Norman and his boat, and the coveted Seagull motor. As soon as I decided to write in first person versus third, I heard Fish talking to me:

It all started the morning I broke into my lobster piggy bank. It’s kind of funny I had money on my mind, since pretty soon all I was going to be thinking about was treasure. But a dare’s a dare, and there was no way I could take back what I said, kind of like Sir Isaac Newton’s Third Law of Motion about how every action (the dare) has an equal and opposite reaction (taking the dare). It explains why the planets stay in their orbits and why if Bryce Billings calls you a baby for playing pirates then you tell him it’s not a game, it’s for real.

Which character did you enjoy writing the most and why?

I enjoyed writing all three main characters--Fish, Roger, and T.J.--because of the way they play off one another, making puns, poking fun, joking around. I know the story is moving in the right direction when I hear them talking to one another—then it’s almost like taking dictation, writing down what they come up with.

What's your favorite scene in the story?

My favorite scene in the story is the entire stakeout at the duck pond, particularly Fish’s swim through the mucky yucky water, Roger’s run-in with the mutant, and T.J.’s notes on the clipboard about Munch Eggs, the island where the treasure is supposedly buried.



You have a lot of facts for your story, how did you research for the story or was this part of your childhood?

I did lots of research for the story—I love researching—and because I spend so much time in the library I had a lot of amazing help from some amazing librarians and archivists. One book I found in the Long Island Collection of the East Hampton Library was all about a supposed secret pirate museum where the author had seen Captain Kidd’s “actual” treasure map, which he included in the book, and I used as the basis for the look of the treasure map in the story.

That's soo cool. My 9-yr-old will love that!



Can we expect more books about Fish and his gang?

Operation Fireball is the second Fish Finelli adventure, which is coming out in Spring 2014.

Why do you write for middle graders?
You know how J.M. Barrie writes in Peter Pan about Wendy when she is two and realizes that she must grow up that “Two is the beginning of the end?” Well, I guess in my experience it seems as if twelve is that end. The middle-grade age group is my favorite, because it’s before that growing-up time and all of the pressures of adolescence. It’s a time when kids are more likely to still believe in “magic.” I identify very strongly with that age group, and have many memories of that time period in my life—I actually often feel as if I am still twelve-years-old.

As a writer, do you plot out your whole story before you start or do you write by the seat of your pants?

Usually once I get the characters figured out and a sense of the story—then I start writing and see where the story wants to go by listening to the characters and feeling out what they want to do. I do an outline, but a loose one, which I tighten up as I go along. I always start by writing scenes for each chapter in a notebook, because I find my ideas (or the characters’ ideas) seem to flow more easily on paper—then once I feel sure of the direction of the chapter, I start typing.

You have an amazing middle grade voice. What advice can you give to aspiring writers about how to find a middle grade voice?

Thank you! As I said, I have a strong affinity for the middle-grade age group. My best advice to aspiring middle-grade writers is to channel their own inner middle-grade selves, including all the fears, worries, joys, triumphs, questions, insecurities, obsessions they remember. It’s also helpful to hang out with a bunch of middle-graders and listen to them talk, ask them questions, find out what they think, how they feel. I have to confess that sometimes after school when my son got off the bus and was telling me about his day, I would actually grab a notebook and take notes on what one kid said about something or someone, or a joke or riddle another one told, or a game they played at recess or a fight that happened at lunch.

Do you have a favorite place to write or snack to eat when you write? 
I wrote much of Seagulls Don’t Eat Pickles sitting in one carrel at the East Hampton Library on one particular maroon office type rolling chair.

I also like to write sitting in a comfy yellow chair I have at home. I like to eat apples and yogurt-covered raisins and drink Kombucha, which I feel is a synapse-firing type of beverage, perfect for the writing process.




Oooh, I love bookcases filled with books---mostly because of the smell. Your hideout looks divine! Thank you again for the interview and good luck to Fish and his gang!





Next stop on the Blog Tour: Ms. Yingling Reads on 7/2/13 for another interview + GIVEAWAY!!

Friday, June 28, 2013

The List: I binged again.

My daughter Lauren officially turned 11. Middle school this year, ack! We of course went book shopping to celebrate. They will all have my sickness by the time they leave for college. It wasn't really a binge because all my girls got a book, I got a few for me, and Lore picked two, right? She's been jones-ing for Inkspell and Inkdeath and the rest of the Ranger's Apprentice (I only have through 7) but when we got to the store, there were too many other choices.

Our book binge on Middle Grade:
The City of Ember by Jeanne DuPrau (Lauren's Pick)
The Land of Stories: The Wishing Spell by Chris Colfer (Lauren's Pick)
The Thief Lord by Cornelia Funke (me)
The Boxcar Children by Gertrude Warner (for Ava)
The School for Good and Evil by Domain Chainani (Everyone wanted this book)
Pandora Gets Frightened  by Carolyn Hennesy (Ava's Pick)
Wings of Fire: The Dragonet Prophecy by Tui T. Sutherland (Bryn's Pick)
Brave (Morgan's Pick Picture book)

My YA musts:
The Elite by Kiera Cass
The False Prince by Jennifer Nielsen

Of all the books, The School for Good and Evil everyone was fighting over who would read it first. And who can blame them, the cover is gorgeous. It makes me drool. Seriously, I'm swallowing spit. Shows the importance of a great cover. It just came out in May. I was drawn to it but read the flap before tucking it under my arm. Bryn and Ava both grabbed it purely on cover and we all laughed that we had picked up 3 copies.

What are your drooling for right now?

Wednesday, June 26, 2013

She's Crafty: Adding Spit Shine

So my query is out there and while I wait, it is time to spit shine. I've been mad revising my current MG adventure for the past two months. So much so, I could no longer process. I rewrote one sentence 3 times before I just gave up and went to bed. I've let the manuscript go cold for two weeks so that I might spit shine this story one last time...is there ever a last time, really? No. It won't be done until it has a cover wrapped around it and you can find it in a bookstore. But for now, I'm giving it one last shine until I hear from the agents.

So what is a revision spit shine? This is when you tighten prose and rework tells. My other writerly friend, Rondi, is querying and revising as well and she had some great advice on how to spit-shine: Every scene needs to be riveting, moving the story forward, every word a gem. And Janice Hardy really explains this best. I seriously have her blog open and go through searching for each word in my WIP. Tedious? Yes, but worth it. I find I'm catching a lot. I have pet words too that I need to delete or change. All my characters still love to slide. They slide through doors, across the floor, out of their seats...you get the point.

Do you have a pet word?

What do you do to spit shine a manuscript?

Monday, June 24, 2013

Marvelous Middle Grade Monday: What My Kids Are Reading

First things first, I need to announce the winner of the Chase Tinker and the House of Magic ebooks:

ZombiMom

Congrats, the stories are fast and fun.

Now for today's pick or rather my kid's picks. I challenged my kids to read a book a week this summer and then I wanted them to post a review for MMGM. Bryn just finished the second book in The Accidental Adventure, she blew through it in 3 days which is kind of a big deal. But she needed to get to bed tonight because we have swim team in the morning. So look for her review next week. This week I thought I would spotlight what they are actually reading because I have a huge stack of middle grade books in my book room. It is always interesting to me what they pick and why. So I thought I would post those for today.

Lauren's (11 yr old) pick this week:
Inkheart by Cornelia Funke

Goodreads Blurb: Twelve-year-old Meggie learns that her father, who repairs and binds books for a living, can "read" fictional characters to life when one of those characters abducts them and tries to force him into service.

Why she picked it: Because she has literally read all my middle grade and this was the last book on the shelf. This is impressive because I have bookcases of MG and she even blew through my TBR pile. So why did she save this book for last? Because the print is small and the book is thick, it's a bit intimidating for a first book in a series. Also, she saw the movie many years ago and it sorta scared her, so she has been nervous to read it. She's 2/3 through and loving it. I have promised to go get the other two books in the series once she finishes.



Bryn's (9 yr old) pick this week:
The Invisible Tower by Nils Johnson-Shelton

Goodreads Blurb: Part of the spell has already been broken.
The first stones have begun to crumble.
In Artie Kingfisher’s world, wizards named Merlin, fire-breathing dragons, and swords called Excalibur exist only in legends and lore—until the day his video game Otherworld springs to life.
You are special, Arthur, Says the mysterious message in his game.

Why she picked it: The cover art. Mostly the dragon and the boy holding a sword which reminds her of Minecraft. Did I mention she's my tomboy? I love it. She just started it but I had to threaten lights out tonight---that's always a good sign of a good book.


Ava's (7 yr old) pick:
Beezus and Ramona by Beverly Cleary

Goodreads Blurb: Nine-year-old Beezus Quimby has her hands full with her little sister, Ramona. Sure, other people have little sisters that bother them sometimes, but is there anyone in the world like Ramona? Whether she's taking one bite out of every apple in a box or secretly inviting 15 other 4-year-olds to the house for a party, Ramona is always making trouble--and getting all the attention. Every big sister can relate to the trials and tribulations Beezus must endure. Old enough to be expected to take responsibility for her little sister, yet young enough to be mortified by every embarrassing plight the precocious preschooler gets them into, Beezus is constantly struggling with her mixed-up feelings about the exasperating Ramona.

Why she picked it: She loved the movie and wanted to read the book. It's a bit hard for her, but we plow through a chapter every night. This was my favorite series as a kid. Love these books.